Joey Pigza swallowed the key

Theme;you will get better if you try harder.

Figurative Launguage(3)

#1 "I began to snort and grunt like the Tasmanian devil on TV."(simile)

#2"Before long I was bumping on the glass wall of the principal's office like a dizzy fish."(simile)

#3"After lunch I felt as if I was sitting on a giant spring and it was all I could do to keep it from launching me head first up into the ceiling."


Thursday, Oct. 23rd, 9pm

Pipestone, MN, United States

Pipestone, MN

This is the story about Joey Pigza he is a kid who is crazy at some times because he is wired. he takes meds but they don't work in the afternoon. At the end of the story he gets these new meds but they are patches that work better than his old ones.


Favorite part

My favorite part was when Joey Swallowed the key after he pooped it out.

Noah Disbrow

I would rate it 6 out of 10 because the sentences are very long in the story but it was a good story.