"In a Country" Poetry Project

Augustra Tostrud, Maggie Hohfeler, Joy Kim, and Mayuri Raja

In a Country

By Larry Levis


My love and I are inventing a country, which we

can already see taking shape, as if wheels were

passing through yellow mud. But there is a prob-

lem: if we put a river in the country, it will thaw

and begin flooding. If we put the river on the bor-

der, there will be trouble. If we forget about the

river, there will be no way out. There is already a

sky over that country, waiting for clouds or smoke.

Birds have flown into it, too. Each evening more

trees fill with their eyes, and what they see we can

never erase.


One day it was snowing heavily, and again we were

lying in bed, watching our country: we could

make out the wide river for the first time, blue and

moving. We seemed to be getting closer; we saw

our wheel tracks leading into it and curving out

of sight behind us. It looked like the land we had

left, some smoke in the distance, but I wasn't sure.

There were birds calling. The creaking of our

wheels. And as we entered that country, it felt as if

someone was touching our bare shoulders, lightly,

for the last time.

Sonic Analysis

Words that contribute to a positive, loving, happy tone: love, inventing, sky, flown, evening, blue, moving, birds, leading, lightly


Many of the words used in this poem a words that are light and make the reader feel good to read. They make the reader feel emotion and feel connected to the story.


Tonal Analysis

First Stanza:

- first sentence: llighthearted, amused, passion for building a new contry

- "yellow mud": anxiety, fear, soft

- "there will be no way out": pause, hopeful, excited, thoughtful, imaginative, louder

Second Stanza:

- new tone of voice: louder, stronger, neutral

- increase in volume, excitement, energy

- "the land we left": still enthusiastic, but recall anxiety of first stanza, softer

- end with calmer, more excited tone that portrays realization

Artistic Connection

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Birds-1 by koam

Thematic Connection

Universal Appeal:


  • Work hard, and get good results.



Personal Appeal:


  • If you try, you will encounter problems, but you will make progress. If you do not try, you will just be stuck.


"Innocence Is A Harmonic Restoration Seed" by Terence George Craddock

innocence is a blessing easily tarnished
innocence sees beauty even in dark souls
innocence has belief to calm brutal beasts
innocence is a sacred gift easily forfeit lost

innocence has faith to restore hardened hearts
innocence has vision to invoke creative remedies
innocence is a unique seed of passion harmonies
innocence has truth to see path to restorations
innocence has patience to work new miracles