By: John Flanagan
Read Halts Peril by: John Flanagan
Will is a smart,and sarcastic person who is quick and strong for his small size.
Halt is stubborn,and ready to use his brain to get out of a sticky situation.He is also strong for his size but doesn't let that get in the way of things.
Horace is shy,and loyal to all his friends. He is a towering giant,and is also very strong.
Thoughts or words
Sarcastic-Will said"because Kicker is there and it's hard to ignore him.
He is sarcastic because Horace is trying to disappear in the bushes and will is getting annoyed of it so he replies sarcastically.
Wills traits: Strong-Will pulled back the heavy long bow and sent an arrow flying.
Will is strong because he can pull back a bow that takes weeks to learn to pull back fully.
Light-He slipped silently out onto the path.
He is very light on his feet which makes him silent.
Point of view
Who is telling the story
Ex:(Halt thinking to himself)Wills mind moved more quickly, and he was inclined to see the unconventional alternative faster than Gilan.
Ex:(Horace talking to will) "Can you see me now," Horace asked?
Ex;(Will replying)Will said"Yes,because Kicker is there and it's hard to ignore him."
Metaphor-To Wills eye,used to the soft green tones in the forests around castle Redmount and Seacliff was uncleanly sad and desolate.
Personification-The wind sighed through the dead branches and trunks, whispering a forlorn sound that was only just audible.
Imagery-The large black burn mark on his face, stretching from just below his left eye to the jawline.