Utopian, say what?

Hook

Then it was in his hand, and he looked at it carefully, but it was the same apple. Unchanged. The same size and shape: a perfect sphere. The same nondescript shade, about the same shade as his own tunic.

Jonas knew something was incorrect when he was holding the apple that had never accured before.

A utopian society is functional until somebody figures out what is really happening and tries to turn a life a a while community has been living around.

Transition: As most know Jonas could start to see color when he stopped taking the injection.

"Their were a lot colors, and one of them was called red. That's the one you are starting to see. Your friend Fiona has red hair, quite distinctive, auctually ; I've noticed it before when you mentioned Fiona hair, it was the clue that told me you were probably beginning to see the color red." (Lowery 119).

Explanation

When Jonas starts to see color it not usual for Jonas to see the weird thing called color he knows it's not right.

Topic sentence

When people know something is up what are they going to do.

Body

A utopian society is functional until somebody figures out what is really happening and tries to turn a life a a while community has been living around. When this happened Jonas wanted to make things right so he decided to flee the city to the outer boundary so he could release all the memories he had been keeping to him self he also took his baby brother Gabriel.

Explanation

When Jonas flees the city he is rebelling and is going against any and everything he was taught as a child. He went and changed the lives of so many.

Conclusion

Jonas is one of the main reasons why a utopian society is not able to stay alive because of the curiosity and rebellious nature inside most that have been living a lie. Therefore a utopian society can olny stay stronge if the one or two loudest minds stay quiet.