The First Smore
M. Griner 1
About Me.
Hey I'm a student in V.A. that's starting this for the first time. I like to play video games and hangout with my friends. I like to play soccer and I am a mid-fielder. I also do ROTC and I do Cross country. I have a good personality and am somewhat funny to my friends. I always make time for my friend s and I hope to strive for greatness.
My Purpose
The reason I am doing this is because our whole class is doing this. Our assignment is to make smores for grades but also to have fun. So we should be doing some or a lot of work on this. So while doing some hard work we can still enjoy it. This way we can experience something both fun and new.
6 Word Memoir
Living life loud with my friends.
Personal Mandala
I am like the color black because I am so gloomy.
My Reflection
In my persuasive essay I believe i did very well. I had good punctuation and lots of details for the essay. But there are some thing I could have done better on. I could have focused on the topic more heavily and used better transitional words. I also could have stated the topic in the first sentence of the paragraphs to help indicate what it is I am talking about. So while I feel I could have done better I think I still did a pretty good job.