The Ghost of Graylock
Other characters action/words- Bre swallowed the panic from her stomach. They had to reach the phone in the barn.
Physical appearance- Neil had some good mentors,his favorite show, Ghostly Investigatiors. Neil had not missed a show since the show had debuted two years ago.
Narrator's comments- Neil turned to find his older sister Bre, standing behind him in the doorway. He new that she just as scared as he was.
Point of View
Example: The room flickered and, for a moment ,a series of images flashed through Neil's mind. Andy focused on the girl,swaying as if he was having a different time staying on his feet.
In these two parts it builds suspense and helps describe a little bit of the setting. Neil and Wesley are at the park after they visited the Graylock hospital. The second section is when Neil and Bre are reliving the night Rebecca died.
The building was not wide, but each of its three stories seemed to rise taller than the last, so that the place looked as if it were actually leaning towards them,trying to hypnotize them forward. (Personification)