The Boy Who Saved Baseball.
By:Riley Longstreet
Theme
The theme of this story is trying to tell you to never give up, no matter how many times you try.
Cruz
Cruz is a very brave young man, he is not afraid of anything. He always has a positive atitude and likes helping others. His hobbies are playing baseball, and riding horse. One of my friends that reming me of him is isaiha.
Shy
Tom is shy and likes to say and think stuff to himself. If he had a great answer to something he wouldnt tell anybody.
Talking a little more
He is starting to talk more now but still thinking to himself alot. Maria and him kinda like eachother but really dont talk.
talkitive
He is starting to express his feelings and not be so shy. Maria and him are talking way more now.
Climax
I think the climax of this story is when they were on the last inning. There was two outs and Tom was up to bat. He smacked the ball straight up in the air. The tall, and athletic pitcher called for the ball while two other players called for it too. The wind was blowing and it made the ball move. The players collided and tom scored in the winning run and won the big game. While the excitment and everything was going on after the game, Someone yelled out, "Doc is in trouble, big trouble." When they looked to see what happend doc had died. I thought the players was going to catch the ball and they were going to lose the game, and i never thought doc was going to have a heart attac.
Mccaden
I think Mccaden is my hero because some how when somethings wrong he always finds a way to make it better. Like in baseball when it was a big game and we needed to get two outs, he turned a double play to me at firstbase. So thats why he is my hero.