FROGGY PLAYS IN THE BAND
Jonathan London/Frank Remkiewicz
To show what band is like.
At school one day Froggy read a sign" it said" marching band contest.
point of view
3rd person point of view.
flopped, and muffled
ex, of figurative language
boom, crack, clang
Froggy went to school and saw a sign "it said" marching band contest Froggy was surprised by the sign so he went to his music teacher Miss Martin Froggy asked what the prize was but she didn't tell him. He used his dads old sax so he practiced a lot. People joined his band and more and more people joined. When they were doing the marching band contest one of Froggys members fell he left her on the ground. They one the contest and one the prize it was a trophy.
No I don't like the story because it was mean when one of Froggys members fell and he left her on the ground.