IR Project

Grading Period 3

Prompt

Explain why you think the author made certain choices in his/her writing.

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There were a lot of interesting things that happened in my book, The Young Elites. The author of the book, Marie Lu, made a lot of choices that effected the book in a big way. Some of the choices that she made, in my opinion, were not very good. I think that she made these choices because it helps to move the book along and keeps you interested. Also, the choices that she made helped the characters connect to the book differently. If I were the author, I probably would have made the book a little different than how she made it. In conclusion, there were a lot of interesting things that happened in my book, The Young Elites.

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There were a lot of interesting things that happened in my book, The Young Elites. The book was affected majorly because of the choices that the author, Marie Lu, decided to make. The events that happened in my reading today, in my opinion, were not the best. I think that they weren't the best because I didn't agree with what happened. Although I didn't like them, the decisions that the author made did help to move the book along and keep you interested because that is what a book is supposed to do. Also I believe that the events helped the characters to connect to the book differently because of what happened. If I was writing the book, the plot probably would've turned out different but that's okay because not every person is the same and we don't all agree. In conclusion, there were a lot of interesting things that happened in my book, The Young Elites.

Author

This is the author of the book that I did my project on, Marie Lu.
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IR book

This is the book that my I read and did my project on.
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Other Books

This is another series that the author of my book wrote. It is called the Legend series.
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