Love

Daneil Jacobs

Broken by Seether

•I wanted you to know that I love the way you laugh
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain away
I keep your photograph and I know it serves me well
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain

'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away

You've gone away, you don't feel me here anymore.

The worst is over now and we can breathe again
I wanna hold you high, you steal my pain away
There's so much left to learn, and no one left to fight
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain

[2x]
'Cause I'm broken when I'm open
And I don't feel like I am strong enough
'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away

'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away

You've gone away
You don't feel me here anymore

analysis

the author uses tone to explain how love is when you put someone else's needs in front of yours also it shows how when you love someone and they leave you don't feel whole anymore.

Daydream by; Joanne Wasserman


You fill the room with sweet sensation
distracting bits of information
crowd the space where logic dwells
distorting sights and sounds and smells
touching me with tactile pleasure
pushing me beyond a measure
of reasonable doubt that soon I sense
I'm nowhere in the present tense.






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poem #2 analysis

the author uses tone and style to create the emotional effect of her poem and explain how love makes her feel as if she is nowhere "in the present tense" the rhyming sentence structure helps to amplify the positive tone

self-made poem

L is for the love and light you feel when their near

O is for the odd new feeling in your gut when you see them

V is for the vast amount of joy they bring to you in your life

E is for the equal feeling and emotions shared between two people

self-made poem analysis

this poem analyzes how love makes some one feel and how the emotions are shared between the two people in love and how these emotions vary and differentiate between joyous and odd.
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visual analysis

hearts are often used to symbolize love and passion and flowers are often used to symbolize life and growth together it shows how love is needed for life and to grow while living.