6 weeks homework
by angelene martinez
grabs the readers attention right off the bat and makes them want to continue reading more.
Ex. Why is he coming for us? there is so many more people here and he comes for us. jimmy said to lucy to hurry and run inside to lock the doors and hide. they were hiding and lucy said I forgot to lock the doors because I was scared. jimmy then said go and lock it but it was to late he was inside and coming for us!
the end of the story were every thing has been found out.
Ex. we know that you did it just tell us why . tim said its because I wanted to be popular