By Erin Matthews
the four generations of computers
Emma Foster- very good:) to improve you could put abit more writing:) i love the video and pictures, keeps you entertained x
Molly Flaherty - I loved it :) To improve you could add a little bit more information.
Emily Rogers - Great information but you could put some more facts in.
Lucy holmes - Hi! i like all of the videos and all of the description :)
Lydia Noon--Hey! this piece if work is very creative i like how you have taken your time to find pictures and videos. i also like how you have found lots of information about everything well done!x:)
Jack frost- thats really full of facts.