Poetry Project

Jake Guerrero

After the War

When the tale is told in text books
Of the battle in the west,
Where the desert meets a desert
And the pasture ain't the best.

When the story's set and stated,
Written down in black and white
For the up and coming soldier
To peruse from left to right.
When the printed pulp is published,
Page on page of lettered lines,
And its dispositioned forces
And its places, points and times.
When the book is there before us,
Full of tactical defeats,
And technical advantages
And strategical retreats.
When the past is put on paper,
Telling why and when and where,
It'll curb the curiosity
Of the thousands that were there.
For the folks that fought this warfare,
On the home front or at the base,
Can peruse their penny papers
And see such and such took place,
But the bloke amidst the battle
Sees his own small, sticky sphere,
And hasn't heard what happened
Further forward or down rear.
He doesn't know the northern news,
The southern state's the same,
And he hopes to hell that convoy
Coming closer turns out tame.
So when those books see daylight
And meet him face to face,
He can pick 'em up and so find out
What actually took place.

Title

Talks about what happened after the war.

Paraphrase

When the tale is told in text books
Of the battle in the west,
Where the desert meets a desert
And the pasture ain't the best.


Battling in deserted lands.


When the story's set and stated,
Written down in black and white
For the up and coming soldier
To peruse from left to right.


When it's written down for future generation to look at and see.


When the printed pulp is published,
Page on page of lettered lines,
And its dispositioned forces
And its places, points and times.


The words are on paper in books for people to read.


When the book is there before us,
Full of tactical defeats,
And technical advantages
And strategical retreats.


Tells how the other side and us had their defeats, advantages, & retreats.


When the past is put on paper,
Telling why and when and where,
It'll curb the curiosity
Of the thousands that were there.


Telling how, where, when it happened in the past.


For the folks that fought this warfare,
On the home front or at the base,
Can peruse their penny papers
And see such and such took place,
But the bloke amidst the battle
Sees his own small, sticky sphere,
And hasn't heard what happened
Further forward or down rear.


Tells how the people went to war and remember what had happened.


He doesn't know the northern news,
The southern state's the same,
And he hopes to hell that convoy
Coming closer turns out tame.


Everyone doesn't know what's going on in the world.


So when those books see daylight
And meet him face to face,
He can pick 'em up and so find out
What actually took place.


Tells about how a battle happened.

Connotation

Conotation- "when the past is put on paper, telling why and when and where, it'll curb the curiosity of the thousands that were there." The truth will be known.

Bloke: a young soilder.

Personification: books seeing daylight and meeting someone.

Attitude of the Speaker

The speaker is pretty much calm during the whole poem.

Shifts

Starts about puting the war in paper to the people who were in the war back to the book.

Title Revisited

Takes about putting the memories into a book.

Themes

War is bad.