The Scouraging Night
It was finally morning and before I went out I looked around making sure that the man that was kidnapping me wasn't out. I quietly went out trying to find some fruit for breakfast. As I was walking I noticed a pond with a woodchuck and then I just thought in my mind,"..........WOW! that woodchuck sure can chuck some wood......." It wasn't till afternoon till I found some nice nonpoisonous fruit. I looked up and saw a bunch of birds flying everywhere and then I just felt like the wicked witch from Wizard of Oz. So then I said, "Fly my pretties, fly!"
While I was searching for some wood fire I heard a strange voice, it sounded just like a human talking. I looked around and I could´t find anyone until I heard,
¨Hello, hello. um, down here.¨ I looked down and saw a talking mouse.
I asked the mouse, ¨Um, yes?¨
¨ I can help you find your home, it´s near here.¨
I then looked at her and I moved my head up and down to show I was saying yes. She started moving very very fast, I could barely catch up. It was finally night.
I looked and I could see a small town and then I looked at a small broken up sign that said, ¨Welcome to Raven wood¨ I was so so excited cause that is were my mom lives. I was running so fast and I saw a bunch of police cars parked outside and my mom was outside also.
I yelled, ¨MOM!¨ She looked over and I started running. She was holding out her arms being ready to hold me tight. I felt so so happy to finally be with my mom again. We were both crying very hard.
One Year Later.......... I looked out on stage. My mom came over and said, ¨Break a leg!¨ I laughed and I got on stage and I had the time of my life.
- Idiom: "Break a leg"
- Alliteration: "WOW! That woodchuck sure can chuck some wood"
- Hyperbole: "A big cannon"
- Allusion: "Fly my pretties, fly"
- Onomatopoeia: "BOOM!"