Theme: A new girl
Similie: It's tiny unblinking eyes were bulging, black as cloves.
The rat's eyes were poping out.
Similie: In our minds we tried to pin her to a corkboard like a buterfly.
Trying to figure her out
Personification:Great orange perched atop a mountain
The sun was seting.
I think it was about a girl and a boy that meet for the first time. Then they like each other,but got shunned. And finnaly she changed into Susan with makeup and earings.Then she leaves and Aichie leaves.