The Bully
Timothy McDaniel
Man vs. Man Conflict
"You gotta stop, Tyray. You been pushing people around for to long. It ain't happenin' no more. Now why don't you apologize to Miss Bea and help clean up the mess you made", Darrell said.
"So whatchu gonna do about it, little man?" Tyray scoffed.
This conversation between Darrell and Tyray shows the rivalry between the two guys.
Suspence
"Me and my boys got plans for this evening, and we need money," Tyray added. " I got no money on me", Darrell said." I spent it all on these oranges." Tyray whipped out a knife and held it up to Darrell's face.
This line shows suspense, because the reader has no idea what Tyray will do with this Knife or what will happen next.
Setting
"Darrell's first look at California was of a desert rimmed by the chocolate-colored Laguna mountains."
This statement tells where Darrell is and where the story takes place. It also shows what is around Darrell as he first arrives to the setting.
Dynamic Characters
This statement shows the change that the main character went through in this story.