My Favorite Story

The Novel

The Revenge Inside of Us


Splash splash. Her chest was moving like a machine. You can hear the pain in her uneven short breaths. With her sharp red high heels she began to run down the dark sidewalk, destroying puddles that reflected the moon in the sky. The clicky sound of her shoes echoed off the dark brown buildings that watched over the busy night of New York City.

What this story has done for me


  • Challenged me as a writer
  • Forced me to be more descriptive

  • Learn more about my characters
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What will forever stay with me

  • Revision and POV
  • Managing time