Writing showcase.

Showcase work #2.

4th grade writing

  • Okish writing.
  • Lack of detail.
  • Lack of Ideas.
  • Rushing.

5th grade writing


  • Better timing.
  • Better writing.
  • A lot of Ideas
  • Okish detail.

4th compared to 5th

I had some struggles in 4th grade but they have gotten better as time has passed and I have gone into 5th. In things like my timing I went from rushing to better timing.