"The Escape" Suspense
By: Leyton Manley
One technique the author used
Dark, Wet, Lightning, Cold, Damp
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One last technique the author used
shone through the bars of a heavy gate." "There was no escape. There was no going back. This was it. Just Boris ... and the rats." Boris was so close to escaping the prison he had a false sense of security thinking he was safe and was going to be okay when he was just trapped with the rats. This makes the reader think whats going to happen to him after that which creates suspense.