raymonds run

by: toni barbara created by: seth walton


Raymond has a rare disorder, I forget the name but he has water on his brain. He is being taken care of by his sister Squeeky who is small but not afraid to fight. Her rival is Gretchin who always makes herself out to be better than she is. For example she will practice piano for weeks and then one day say that she heard a piece and just picked it up like that. Well there is a big race that squeeky is practicing for with raymond that Gretchin also wants to win. On the day of the race Squeeky wins the race by a neck. She sees Raymond running and decides to be less competitive and teach Raymond how to run.


the theame is when you set someone else as a role model, you can follow them and achieve