Jessica Darlings it list
What's it about ?
Powerful point in writing
1. My best friend had turned pretty.
2. She didn't know it yet.
3. It wouldn't be long before she did.
4. That knowledge would change everything between us.
5. A there wasn't a thing i could do about it."
I think this is powerful because it's her first day of junior high and she already thinks that she is doomed.