Kian's Smore Flyer
A new ending for the chapter
Chapter 2 - I don't really enjoy this book very much, because it's a very unusual story that has a a weird plot. I also get confused when I'm reading the story from time to time, because the author puts in a lot of very vague details that I feel have no mean. I always have to reread a paragraph because I get mixed up with the story. But overall I feel like the author made a good job trying to change the tone of reading, a completely different type of story for people to read. But there should be less sensory details and more about talking about the story. In Chapter 2 for instance, I didn't understand why the author put the part with Mrs. Parsons or the memory of his past where he was in a sinking ship or something. That was at the time I first read the chapter.